Hi Isla, I love the imagination and thought that has gone into your writing. You have tried hard to create an interesting and original storyline using unique character ideas. I would have loved a little more description to really engross your audience. What was the atmosphere like? How did the mayor pixie feel? Great start, well done!
Hi Isla, I love the imagination and thought that has gone into your writing. You have tried hard to create an interesting and original storyline using unique character ideas. I would have loved a little more description to really engross your audience. What was the atmosphere like? How did the mayor pixie feel? Great start, well done!
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